2017年06月四级第1套作文题目及参考范文

本页收录2017年06月四级第1套写作部分的题目、参考范文与写作要点。大学英语四级写作限时 30 分钟，要求 120–180 词，评分侧重切题、结构清晰与语言准确，范文后附结构拆解与可迁移句型。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications / features, condition and price, and your contact information.

You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

题目要求：Campus advertisement for selling a used computer

参考范文

Campus advertisement for selling a used computer

Attention fellow students! I am offering my well-maintained Dell Inspiron laptop for sale. This computer has been my trusted companion throughout my college years. It boasts an Intel i5 processor, 8GB RAM, and a spacious 1TB hard drive, making it perfect for multitasking and storing large files. The laptop is in excellent condition, with only minor signs of wear, and it comes with the original charger and a laptop bag. I'm asking for $500, which is a steal considering its performance and condition. If you're interested, please contact me at johndoe@email.com or call me at 123-456-7890. Don't miss this opportunity to own a reliable computer at a student-friendly price!

结构分析

第 1 段 引入段：吸引注意，介绍出售的电脑品牌和个人使用背景
第 2 段 展开段：详细描述电脑的规格/特点、状况和价格
第 3 段 总结段：强调价格优势，提供联系方式，鼓励行动

高分要点

使用了'Attention fellow students!'等吸引注意的开头
详细列出了电脑的配置，使用了专业术语如'Intel i5 processor'
通过'making it perfect for multitasking'等表达突出电脑的优势
使用了'Don't miss this opportunity'等鼓励行动的语句

核心词汇

Dell Inspiron 戴尔灵越
Intel i5 processor 英特尔i5处理器
multitasking 多任务处理
student-friendly price 学生友好的价格

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