2017年12月四级第3套作文题目及参考范文

本页收录2017年12月四级第3套写作部分的题目、参考范文与写作要点。大学英语四级写作限时 30 分钟，要求 120–180 词，评分侧重切题、结构清晰与语言准确，范文后附结构拆解与可迁移句型。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

题目要求：how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients

参考范文

How to Best Handle the Relationship Between Doctors and Patients

In the contemporary era, the relationship between doctors and patients has become increasingly complex. Effective communication stands as the cornerstone of a healthy doctor-patient relationship. Firstly, doctors should engage in active listening and empathy, which are essential for understanding patients' concerns and establishing trust. Secondly, transparency in medical information is crucial; doctors must clearly explain diagnoses, treatment options, and potential risks. Moreover, patients should be encouraged to ask questions and voice their apprehensions. Lastly, mutual respect is vital; both parties should treat each other with dignity and professionalism. In conclusion, fostering a collaborative atmosphere where open dialogue is valued can significantly enhance the doctor-patient relationship.

结构分析

第 1 段 引入段：描述医生和患者关系的复杂性，强调有效沟通的重要性
第 2 段 展开段：具体阐述如何建立良好的医生和患者关系（倾听、透明度、鼓励提问）
第 3 段 总结段：总结建立良好关系的要素，强调开放对话的价值

高分要点

使用了'cornerstone'等高级词汇
运用了'Firstly, Secondly, Moreover, Lastly'等顺序词，使文章结构清晰
使用了'engage in active listening and empathy'等复杂句式
逻辑清晰，过渡自然（In the contemporary era, Effective communication stands as, In conclusion）
词汇丰富，避免重复（relationship, communication, transparency, dialogue）

核心词汇

cornerstone 基石
active listening 积极倾听
transparency 透明度
dignity 尊严

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